Alraumon

[mirei]

Alraumon
_{Bloom in heaven}

LEVEL.

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_Rookie
AGE[/size][/color]
₂₅
GENDER[/size][/color]
_Female
RANKING.[/size][/color]
_Wild
ATTRIBUTE.[/size][/color]
_Data
TYPE.[/size][/color]
_Plant
VOICE ACTOR/ACTRESS.[/size][/color]
_None
THEMES.[/size][/color]
_{Sad theme: A power called sorrow
Normal theme: Flower field
Battle theme: Justice girl}

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PERSONALITY.[/size][/color]

<sub>Originally a naive, innocent and curious digimon , the hardships of life forced her to mature a lot to the point that her evolution level as a rookie digimon made no justice to her mental evolution. She had to learn to be responsible about her acts and to think about the welfare of her companions, she simply couldn't afford anymore to be selfish and only think about herself. However, the Alraumon often shows a cheerful but respectful and almost childish personality by default during first encounters with new people, that way dangerous digimon would underestimate and treat her like a pushover not worth their time and good digimon would be more prone to trust in her.

She always tries to be mature, but sometimes she can't help but express the childish side she tried to bury years ago. Like many plant digimon, she enjoys dances and songs and could even join a group performing if her interest peaked. Besides that, she loves sweets and salty food and no matter how much she resist, she is prone to request a small slice of whatever food she fancies.

Unlike many digimons to whom their secondary sex characteristics and gender identity are merely cosmetic, the graceful plant digimon is deeply in contact with her femininity. She might be just a teenager for now, but someday she wants to become lady-like to be like a mother for all digimonkind and guide them with grace, motherly love and dignity to a better future; so the more she evolves, the more she tried to be more womanly and adult-like.

She values individuality and freedom a lot and frowns upon those who enslaves or forces others to do their bidding. The Alraumon feelings nothing but disdain for human and digimon criminals who abuses of their power to violate the freedom of others and turns them into just a number, nothing more than an object to be treated like merchandise. Therefore, she bound to clash with those who believes might makes right.

The Alraumon might be more of a talking and diplomatic digimon than a fighting one, but like a rose, she is beautiful and frail looking, yet her thorns aren't for show. She is more than willing to use brute force when it is required to correct a wrongdoing. She once was a pacifist who believed everything can be solved through dialog, but the harshness of the digital world changed the way she thinks. Some people simply refuses to listen or understand other living beings, and that's when she has to get aggressive to make her message reach their stubborn hearts.</sub>

HISTORY.[/size][/color]

<sub>It all began in a small village entirely inhabited by plant digimon, where many digimon migrated after reaching enough age to leave the village of beginnings. From the many digimon living there, there was one naive and innocent digimon who after having a quiet an uneventful life as Yuramon in the village of beginnings, moved along other digimon to another village as soon she evolved to Tanemon. There, she happily lived along the many other plant digimon and enjoyed the lessons of the village elder, a Jureimon bearer of immense wisdom who witnessed many of the world threatening incidents of the past years and shared with the young digimons his experience, knowledge and life lessons.

This young digimon in particular loved to listen to the old tree digimon's speeches and was his number one student. Always eager to acquire more knowledge, she learn through his lectures many things like digimon types and species, history lessons, how to raise crops and find food, and even a bit about battle tactics, strategy and how to gauge properly the ability of a hostile digimon between other things. And so, she spent most of her time as Tanemon and later as Alraumon learning from Jureimon important life lessons that would prove to be useful in the nearby future.

Back then, life was really nice, water and food were plentiful and nobody dared to attack the immature plant digimon thanks to the protection of the elder Jureimon. Nobody ever thought about leaving the safety of the village other than the grown ups and even then many champion level digimon stayed just because it really was a great place where to live. However, the winds of change arrived to the village and they were merciless: The beloved Jureimon elder died of old age and without the protection he provided to the infant plant digimon, many brigands, raiders and bandits ransacked their village to steal the production of their food farms and killed some digimon just because they could, that was the beginning of the village's unavoidable fall ...

In those times of chaos and turmoil, the Alraumon tried to keep her friends together and put to good use the teachings of her deceased mentor. She really insisted in telling them to remain united and focus in restoring order to the village just as Jureimon would've done. Alas, her words reached deaf ears and no one listened to her, despairing because they relied too much in the defunct elder and never tried to use their own strength and willpower to face the hardships of life. What's more, many of them were already champion level, yet they still acted like spoiled babies who couldn't do anything by themselves.

And so, slowly with the pass of years, the number of inhabitants decreased. Some left what they considered a doomed village, some died at hands of the ruthless attacks of the raiders, and only very few actually tried to make the best out of the situation and stick together, but even they eventually lost hope and left.

And that's how after many years trying to be the voice of reason in a village of spoiled brats, the Alraumon ended alone, her sole companions being the insects who predated on the rotten food left in the farms and the books and scrolls Jureimon left behind as part of his self, his memories and experiences. Despite being alone, she decided to remain in the abandoned village not to foolishly cling to a past memory but to meditate and think about what to do with her life, she was already 25 years old and still remained in the humble shape of a rookie, having spent more time speaking and studying than actually training like the others.

Then, she decided what was going to be her lifetime goal: To conquer the digital world and become the digimon queen, the one who transcend digimonkind with supremacy, decides the rules to be followed, and more importantly, unifies digimon of all species and territories under a single flag, that way no more digimon would have to suffer from the attack of bandits and those kidnappers who began to appear some years ago, capturing defenseless digimon for their unknown and most likely nefarious schemes.

It was a too utopian dream and at her current evolutionary level, she lacked the power to directly confront those deemed the scum of the digimon society. However, her lack of might was more than compensated with the teachings of Jureimon and the many years of experience with her, so she was not a kid who would let other boss her around and was backed up by the knowledge she acquired so far. And so, in a day like any other, she left her hometown, leaving behind many memories from better times buried behind and more than ready to seek for power. Such power wasn't the raw power that comes along with evolution but that special "something" leaders have that gives them the support of their followers and the ability to properly lead a whole world to a new era of change and progress.

That day was the day when her journey started. It was a journey to discover the attributes a future queen required to be a great leader and to learn how was the world outside that little village now in ruins. And so, through her experiences, discover the kind of digital world she wanted to create. She knew that a revolution had to take place to change the way the world works, but she still didn't know what to do in the case her quest for sovereignty were successful. She didn't even know if what she wanted was what other digimon wanted, but that was one of the goals of her journey anyway, to learn from the many digimon living in the vast world how they believe the digital world should be.</sub>

BATTLE SKILLS[/size][/color]

_{• Nemesis Ivy - Entangles the opponent in ivy laced with a powerful toxin, causing partial paralysis of the body
• Gloom Dust - Spreads a fog of poisonous dust.
• Hungry Hand -Drains the enemy's lifeforce}

EVOLUTION LINE.[/size][/color]

_{Yuramon » Tanemon » Alraumon » Togemon » Lillymon » Rosemon}

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ONLINE HANDLE.[/size][/color]
_Mirei
AGE.[/size][/color]
₂₅
OTHER CHARACTERS?[/size][/color]
_{None yet}
RP SAMPLE.[/size][/color]

<sub>"Mushroomon, Floramon ..."

An Alraumon said as the last inhabitants of her home left, now alone in what once was a prosperous plant digimon village. Since peace was restored to the digital world a few decades ago, quite a few new settlements both appeared and vanished and this plant digimon village was no different. Digimon were raised, grew and eventually matured and left, and with the pass of time it's population slowly decreased, not only because the many digimon abandoned their home seeking for greener pastures but because bad digimon attacked them and some of the nature-loving digimon died even before managing to evolve to rookie level

"Farewell, my childhood memories ..."

She said to herself and like many other digimon did before, she left to find fortune in the world outside their little village. And that way, the last plant digimon left and the winds of change eroded the village until nothing but ruins remained of what once was home for plant digimon ...

However, that was not the end but only the beginning of the journey for through all the experiences earned in her journey, the alraumon learned so many things that expanded her vision of the world ... death, starvation, the eternal struggle for survival, those were harsh times for digimonkind. However, not all was despair and she could see life struggling but also succeeding in the search for survival in the small digimon in settlements like her former one as the one built by the Koromon and the Pyokomon. There was both a good and a bad side for everything and it was up to everybody to decide if shape the future with their own hands, or live ignorant of what happened to the world in the modern times.</sub>

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[honeybee]

Run-on Sentences:

-Nearly every sentence is a run-on, some paragraphs being only one or two sentences long! The paragraphs appear quite lengthy due to the sheer volume of words per sentence. For example; "However, the alraumon often shows a cheerful but respectful and almost childish personality by default during first encounters with new people, that way dangerous digimon would underestimate and treat her like a pushover not worth their time and good digimon would be more prone to trust in her, besides, it would look wrong in an alraumon to act like a serious and mature lady, and being cheerful is actually her original personality from when she believed there was nothing to worry about in the world and the elder Jureimon would forever protect her and her friends." is a single sentence.

Flow/Consistency:

-You mention a lot of aspects of her history in her personality, which is a bit confusing considering that apps are usually read from top to bottom.
-Your writing in the personality section is a bit disjointed: you mention AIR in a paragraph about how individual she is, you mention her ‘new goal’ not in the paragraph about said goal but in the paragraph on how she sometimes lets her childish side show.
-You mention nothing of her time as a Yuramon or Tanemon.

Other:

-It’s recommended not to give your digimon a nickname. On that note, how would a wild digimon who’s lived her whole life in a world where digimon are addressed by species name even get the idea of having an individual name?
-You lack consistency in capitalizing digimon names.
-“bring a new era of prosperity “ propensity means ‘an inclination to behave in a certain way’, 'a certain way' being nonspecific and thus impossible to usher in an era of.

We would love to accept this app once the errors are fixed! :3

[mirei]

Done! I hope the application is free of errors this time.

[Shibata Hayate]

A C C E P T E D _
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